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Open Poetry #41

I Wonder Do You Realise

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-08-24 12:06 PM

I Wonder Do You Realise

Having made every attempt
To reach out and touch
I wonder do you realise
That I missed you so much

The reasons I tried to reach
Was because I cared
Memories remind me
Of special times we shared

In writing yet another poem
Whilst thinking of you
With longings in verse
My feelings written are true

Thoughts go down on paper
Sincere notes I signed
Writing to clearly show
You are always on my mind

Hope ©2007

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

1 posted 2007-08-24 03:06 PM

Very nicely penned, Hope.

MoonShadow
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JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2007-08-26 05:19 AM

"Thoughts go down on paper
Sincere notes I signed
Writing to clearly show
You are always on my mind"

Sweet words indeed.
JL

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2007-08-26 02:51 PM

This could be a country western song, Hope.

....jo

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2007-08-26 03:16 PM

Maybe he does not realise, but for sure he still inspires you beautifully. And this too is a precious gift.
Lovely, dear Hope.
Love and hugs.
Margherita

teddymarvelle
Junior Member

since 2007-08-26

Posts 47
california usa

5 posted 2007-08-28 02:23 AM

oh my... hind sight is always 20/20... realizations always come post haste.. nice work

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2007-08-28 04:32 PM

Nice...James

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