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Open Poetry #41

In Layers Of Dream

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-08-24 08:38 AM

And I dream in layers
of yesterday's shadows
and tomorrow’s hopes
held by a single thread
of today;

I wait for the stands to fray

unraveling the torturous grip
of sienna nights in searing caress
under silver moon sky
where eyes still searched soul

reflecting on glass
captured images
stretched out panther like
in grace of slumbering embrace

before the mourning came to call

shattering the layers
of dream.

after a fall I get back up,
move on 'cause the past is the past and theres no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on ~dsmith

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

1 posted 2007-08-24 09:44 AM

Donna, I like this very, very much.

MoonShadow
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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-08-24 01:31 PM

interesting 'write'!

I am particularly fond of:

“I dream in layers
of yesterday's shadows…”

AND:

“sienna nights…
under silver moon sky…”;

Applause!!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2007-08-24 02:23 PM

and I love this play...

"before the mourning came to call"

yes gentle Donna
that's the word
hugs

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

4 posted 2007-08-25 01:59 AM

And I dream in layers
of yesterday's shadows
and tomorrow’s hopes
held by a single thread
of today;

I love this.

A

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2007-08-26 05:23 AM

I agree with aziza. Excellent write.
(But I like lumpy oatmeal)

JL

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2007-08-27 12:58 PM

Lady Kate, indeed it is.

Thank you, each.

after a fall I get back up,
move on 'cause the past is the past and theres no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on ~dsmith

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