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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-08-23 04:14 PM


Romantic Hearts (Living In Lies)

What would you have
if you loved someone
and you would give all
of your heart to them if
only they also loved you?

I know the above mentioned
words sound romantic,
but what if they didn't
share those same
feelings for you.

You would have hopes and dreams
and want to be with them but
what would that do for you...

NOTHING...

Someone that wants you
will get in your face
and tell you of their
feelings for you.
They will tell you the
extent they like you
and they will not be shy
about telling you why.

Otherwise, you and your
romantic heart are
living in a lie.
And we don't want
romantic hearts
living in lies.

JamesLee
23August
2007
This is not a true story.
Although at times it
has been...







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TomMark
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1 posted 2007-08-23 05:50 PM


romanticly true.

that is why dating.

enjoyed the read

Tomtoo

sweetbomb
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since 2007-08-07
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2 posted 2007-08-23 09:57 PM


I can so identify. I sometimes think, what is wrong with me, I know the truth. I want to kick myself. D
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-08-24 04:51 PM


Thank you Tom Mark and sweetbomb for the nice responses...
Sweetbomb I have come to the conclusion that love is not about us getting what we want...love is more about learning and growing, and as we learn the lessons of love we realize that love is more than a word, much more, love is a way of life...James

WindWalker
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4 posted 2007-08-28 07:08 PM


This was very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MoonShadow
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5 posted 2007-08-28 08:27 PM


Love IS a way of life, yes.
   Yet life can be juxtaposed
      leaving Love as 'Star-Crossed'.

      MoonShadow
.

vandana
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6 posted 2007-08-29 12:26 PM


good read
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-08-29 05:31 PM


Thank you Windwalker, Moon Shadows and vandana for the wonderful responses...James
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