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Silver Shiver
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Silver Shiver |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Silver Shiver today is filled with liquid transparencies stacked vertically amid the ruins of clouds a yesteryear beaded curtain clinging too tightly outside my window boldly straight lined perfection obstructing horizon as I press close to it all that appears is suspension in vapor of me whispering past the sliver for the sun "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
feeling this deeply Helen...you express yourself well here.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"a yesteryear beaded curtain" WIHTOT! You make it easy to feel the poem, Slick Lady. *hus*....jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
this whispers in ache |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
your silver shiver cries Helen lovely |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I like how you wrote about TODAY....so many of us live in yesteryears and tomorrows, that CAN cling too tightly....wishing, regreting, hoping,.... "a yesteryear beaded curtain clinging too tightly" my favorite part... Take care, Julie ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh Helen, you are a real treat Loved this... today is filled with liquid transparencies stacked vertically  Now, I'm trying to imagine reading it vertically...hehe outstanding write...as always |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
all that appears is suspension reminds me of my dreams...never completed   M |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
This is one of my new-found favorites that you've shared... A most enjoyed read 1Slick_lady  *~coco~* |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
It's like a great philosopher once said... Rainy days and Mondays always get me down. Well, maybe not a "great" philosopher.... Nice images here Helen. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
You know, you are the first name that catches my eye when I come in here now. Lovely, Lady...as usual"I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Loved the imagery in this fine poem. Love, Margherita |
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