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Open Poetry #41

I Believe

PoloniusFicklebottom
Junior Member

since 2007-06-27

Posts 17

0 posted 2007-08-22 04:43 PM

I believe,
to keep a healthy relationship,
in the house your children live,
...you should beat your kids.
-and by "beat",
I mean, "adore"!

I believe,
you must resolve complicated issues,
and the only way to end these disputes,
...is duel with pistols.
-and by "duel with pistols",
I mean, "listen more"!

I believe,
to be the best person you can be,
to let your potential peak,
...remember, lie and cheat,
-and by "lie and cheat",
I mean, "always work hard"!

I believe,
to ensure your love's legit,
so you'll never worry about it,
...take what you can get.
-and by "take what you can get",

I mean,

"use your heart".

Ficklebottom!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-08-24 07:46 AM

Nice job. Yes I agree, when we use the heart to interprete words, the meaning becomes clearer, because we dive deeper into the psyche of another.

Love,
Margherita

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