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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-08-19 10:27 AM

Cling

Peach halves in fuzzy sighs surround
Grown together, center bound
To Cling;

Even through the changes time can bring
The whistle of forever winds still sing
Come sweet:

The moment when our eyes will meet
Filling in concaves with juices flowing

After glowing

Tart in tune of ageless knowing
Love will ripen, once the seed gets going

Fruits upon a supple branch
Bloom in sunshine takers chance

Pick me, my love, as seasons gleam
For here I’ve waited sight unseen

As all along the coax of pink
Imbued, the flesh of moonlight wink
Never a day that I don’t think
Of you

Beseech the peach I’m partial to

Copyright Kkh 8/19/07

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2007-08-19 11:12 AM

reminds me, I think...of the movie "Face Off"
with Nicolas Cage...and the scene where he
is trying to say the word Peach...Yeah,
you are right...I'm a little touched in the
old Haid...

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2007-08-19 12:28 PM

"Even through the changes time can bring
The whistle of forever winds still sing
Come sweet:

The moment when our eyes will meet
Filling in concaves with juices flowing"

These words could charm the fuzz right of an entire orchard of peaches.
Beautiful words.

JL

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2007-08-19 01:01 PM

the nectar stays
on the skin
long after
the peach
has been devoured

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2007-08-19 01:30 PM

nice!

I am particularly fond of:

"Even through the changes time can bring
The whistle of forever winds still sing
Come sweet:

The moment when our eyes will meet(!)"

Applause!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2007-08-20 06:32 PM

very beautifully done....

Bronzeage
Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 197

6 posted 2007-08-23 02:37 AM

A beautiful write. Very well done.

Type II poet. Its worth the work.

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

7 posted 2007-08-23 11:04 AM

  Beautiful, Kathleen. Lovely sentiment that
    flows musically over the tongue.
      My taste of romance for sure!

            MoonShadow
.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2007-08-24 07:41 AM

quote:
Fruits upon a supple branch
Bloom in sunshine takers chance

Pick me, my love, as seasons gleam
For here I’ve waited sight unseen

You never fail to amaze me, dear TD!

Precious verses.

Love,
Margherita

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