Open Poetry #41 |
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Felix Pulls A Bad One |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Felix is out on the avenue, looking for a client. A guy in a car drives by. The guy likes what he sees. The guy picks Felix up, takes Felix home with him. The guy treats Felix wrong Misuses him bad. Felix hates it, he hates that guy. When you’re only twelve, and you’re hungry, you’ve got to take it. Bobby |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~Felix~way way beyond 'a bad hair day'.... I enjoy these snapshots. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Bobby Such a tough kid I bet he never showed anyone his tears or scars. A |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
sad, sad story and novel behind those verses. Tomtoo |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
effective snapshot/impression of 'life' on the mean streets of the "Runaway American Dream"! applause! |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Midnitesun, Yes, you have that right. Sometimes it’s just not worthwhile to wake-up in the morning. Aziza, No he doesn’t, not ever. There’s not much money in belly-aching. Tomtoo, Yes, that’s true, and the beat goes on. Secondhanddreampoet, This is very true. For many, the “dream” remains a nightmare. Bobby |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Felix`s experiences take a nasty turn at times. |
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