Open Poetry #41 |
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Tangible Evidence |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida ![]() |
One day we will stand sure, and smile again… We will dance with elation As we clap our hands and find our uncontainable laughter… All the tears that shatter our eyes Will fade before they are granted freedom to fall… One day we will be together again No longer to miss you; You will be tangible evidence of God’s love And graciousness… To touch you again…A shiver grips and shakes us~ For a moment We hold our breath with anticipation… So many things we want to say to you….. One day… We will never have to say good-bye… ~dgvarner 030305 |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
I enjoyed this. I get the feeling this is to a soldier perhaps? Poignant. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
perfect and so hopeful! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and beautiful again enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetDG~ It is always good to read you~ I love the thought of the 'uncontainable laughter' that will be found again~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ms. Varner, This congers up all kinds of emotion. What a hopeful positive write. Nice. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Thanks to all of you for reading!! I really appreciate your comments ![]() This was written a couple of years ago when a friend's friend was faced with cancer and not doing well...I just started thinking about how one day we would never have to say good-bye to the people we love...I can't wait for that...! thanks again! g "...Never regret anything that made you smile..." |
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