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A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2007-08-20 09:50 AM

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My pen is bleeding on the paper,
As love is bleeding in my heart.
Each word's the bare truth -
Put these words to music,
Play this music on the strings of my soul,
If you don't tear them, I'm yours.

If you see me dying,
Will you hold my hand through this hell?
Will you save me like you did once?
You know where to find the way
To the temple of my hope.
And I don't know...

If only I had died tomorrow,
Would you've turned back time,
So that tomorrow'd never come?
And if I asked you
To kill me with your bare hands,
Just not with your indifference... would you?

I can't breathe the air of fear.
I'm suffocating... will you hold me in your arms
To chase the fear away?
Will you breathe life into me?
Will you forgive me the weakness of one day
If I'm your shield for all the lifetime?

If I could live an hour of your life,
Dwell in your inner world that's just your own,
I'd turn to real your most precious dreams.
And if you realize
I love you with each ounce of my heart,
Will you ever say goodbye?

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-08-20 06:37 PM

Another finely thoughtful, thought-provoking, and effectively emotive, romantic 'write'!

Applause!!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2007-08-20 06:40 PM

beautifully done, allowing one's heart wide open and vulnerable...to whatever is....very heartfelt write

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

3 posted 2007-08-21 06:07 AM

Thanks a lot for responding!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2007-08-21 09:39 AM

"If I could live an hour of your life,
Dwell in your inner world that's just your own,
I'd turn to real your most precious dreams.
And if you realize
I love you with each ounce of my heart,
Will you ever say goodbye?"

~~
Precious write. Hoping these words don’t fall on deaf ears.

JL

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2007-08-21 10:35 AM

I hope the one this is written for realise your innermost feelings you have penned

Hope

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

6 posted 2007-08-22 02:17 AM

how very romantic!!!

enjoyed the read.

Tomtoo

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

7 posted 2007-08-24 10:29 AM

Thanks

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