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Open Poetry #41

The Blues-Remix

Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2007-08-19 06:20 PM

he dreams her songs-
he only dreams of what he knows
and since he is blind
he dreams not in sight
but in touch
and in taste
and of course he dreams in sound
her sound
the blues

he turns off the radio
and listens to the music
not frenzied beats or pulsating rhythms
but
the slow suction of the blues
drawing
pulling him in-
swimming in the womb of her
as if perhaps submerged
in a warm jacuzzi
filled with soothing antiseptic
balming a cut in an anapestic beat
ta ta dum
as she calls out to him
reaching in and grabbing his being
twisting and tugging
her mojo tearing holes in his essence
her moans piercing his soul
until he is consumed
consumed by her sound
consumed by her
the blues

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
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1 posted 2007-08-19 07:03 PM

absolutely beautiful.

enjoyed the read

Tomtoo

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

2 posted 2007-08-19 11:15 PM

~damn, am I digging this~~

niiiice~

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
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3 posted 2007-08-21 10:01 PM

You bring back memories
of my father, sitting in his darkened room
(he didn't need light as he couldn't see much anyway)
listening to opera

Tim, I have been enjoying your poems.

Thank you
A

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