Open Poetry #41 |
Written By Candlelight |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Written By Candlelight Subtle chills surprise the face of this August night Conjuring autumn’s trace, allures by candlelight Giving me to the fragrance of warm thoughts A kiss Probing in distant melody along adams-apple red Followed by the sigh of feelings savored, never said Involuntary shivers elongate down my throat As I swallow gratefully the nectar of dreams Oh, majestic relevance flows deeper than it seems Settling augment as the flame submits to shadows Low, the light that travels this pantomime of fall Fervently voracious, lick of lips ephemeral Breathing in the rapture as I lay in sinless yearn A kiss Written by candlelight, aflame the soul cannot discern Copyright Kkh 8/17/07 |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Very good, Diamond. I love the "sinless yearn" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mercy dear lady, but thee art in thy zone and thy pen is most warm...indeed it is. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ This is *sigh* pretty~ 'adams-apple red' Creatively perfect ! Funny, I just received an email from a unique dictionary where folks can put in their own 'words' and the meanings ... today's word was "Madam's apple" Noun. A pun on "Adam's apple," it refers to the large bulge on the trachea when it occurs on a woman. Love your ink-of-think on this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As rivers run their waters deep and flickers dance the cherried walls, a fawn lies still in fitful sleep as distantly the owl calls. And from the moon a night is set to wait for yet another rise, a rise of light from brightest sun...that fills the earth, the sea and skies... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Couldn't resist, honey... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
excellent accent Sun....ya done good. I am sure she will be pleased. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You weave magic with your words, you do. JL |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Grand lines and images here!... I am especially fond of: “majestic relevance flow(ing) deep…”; “light that travels this pantomime of fall”; “flame submits to shadows”; “the nectar of dreams”; “Subtle chills surprise the face of this August night Conjuring autumn’s trace, allures by candlelight Giving me to the fragrance of warm thoughts”; Applause! |
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