Open Poetry #41 |
I Hear You |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I Hear You… My child, I've heard your whispers when you speak to the silence in your mind, you ask Me what I see in you if I see in you any reason or rhyme. Come, for I see the great cheer in you and in you I see the delight, as you go forth to the less fortunate and guide them through the night. I see Myself the lone shame in you for past transgressions wrought, I see the forgiveness that you ask for realizing what can't be bought. I see in you, My child, the hurt over your genetically stubborn pride, and I would ask that you continue to pray and from Me, no, please, never hide. I see past pain, and continued hope I see troubled shadows creep within, I see you raise your eyes to heaven I see the trembling in your chin. And then I see your very grace, as the tears well up in your eyes every time you lift your face your love cannot be compromised. I see a heart that bares its soul I see you think to impart great golden goals even though your own have not been met for you have prayed to Me. No, I don't forget. I see you try to do your best, and every day you wonder "oh my ~ did I slip, break a heart, or worse?" that's when I catch you on the fly. O My child, continue on, do your best in this, My name and continue please to pray to Me, and I will keep you from harm, and shame. Love, God ©KRJ 22 June 2000 [Revised, 08-17-07] Posted originally in Spiritual, but now I have several additional grandchildren who may someday find this to be more appropriate in Open. Thank you for reading. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Absolutely beautiful. pure and shinning. love the read. Tomtoo |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Karilea, this really touched me. Thank you for sharing it. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I really liked this it had a very nice message and flow. Krysti ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed the message...James |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful poetry!! No matter what forum. JL |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice, just what it should be and how it should be as well. Thanx KJ |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I enjoy your sojourns into meter and rhyme. Nicely written. |
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