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Praying For Rain (a Bel1e inspire)
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Praying For Rain (a Bel1e inspire) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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It's not as if I could feel anything after you bled my emotions dry and left me there in the scorching after math of the moment thirsting for a single tear, a touch of dew a drop of rain anything.... that could make this soul awaken again.. Storm clouds swirl ominous, ever present keeping at bay the sweet release I seek from this darkness overpowering me, breaking my spirit Weakened I have begged but the screams fade... turn to whispers, through this silence of my own stillness with palms pressed towards the skies I still am here praying for rain.... {revised 8-17-07} each time makes me stronger...but after the fall.... we get back up and move on, because the past is the past and there is no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on...~dmsmith~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... she will be pleased I am sure.. a "wow" piece of writing ma'am... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ahh capt something old that was inspired by the beauty of her words once upon a time. It pleases me that you thought it to be wow...lol...and I sincerely hope that the lady approves of my meager offering.  |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
omg~~ this is dire....a scream ripped from the core of soul....sure to shatter the heavens in eruptions of lightning and thunder with it's depth of color and sound...and I am absolutely floored that any of my lunacy has inspired this.....they'll have me in quaranteen for sure ...LOL I love this, Gentle~~  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
smilin here...sweet lady your lunacy has inspired and been an inspiration on many occasions. I remember when I originally wrote this, how at that time I had not even an ounce of desire or notion to write and upon reading one of your most amazing writes this is what spewed forth from me and it was a very healing feeling sistah.... and for that? I am eternally grateful dear friend. Thank you so much lovie, for your support of my words it truly means much to me.  hmm now, if I could just write something new..  each time makes me stronger...but after the fall.... we get back up and move on, because the past is the past and there is no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on...~dmsmith~ |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~~feverishly summoning up the Muse for you, here~~~ I love reading you as well...and your presence here has always been a source of encouragement and support...(((thank you, love)))  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sweetie, you are too kind. Only if my muse would return soon, but thank you kindly for the summoning..lol....yer to much lady!!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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