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Abe
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2007-08-17 06:17 AM


CRANDALL CANYON CAVE-IN


It's too bad we have more heroes
Who gave their lives in selfless ways
Trying to save the lives of others
After toiling many nights and days.

The mountain “bumped” with warnings
But those Miners, paid no heed
Although they must have been fearful
They just continued to proceed.

It's a very dangerous job at best
For those who work beneath the ground
With toxic fumes and bad machinery
And Earth's dreaded rumbling sound.

But, for those who go as saviors
After the roof falls to the floor
There's not enough can be said about
These who risk limb and life and more.

Their loved ones can take some solace
Although it will never ease the pain
Just knowing these men gave their all
Heroes, one and all, that's plain.

One Lady wrote words upon a note
Said, most all people in her family
From past and present, all were miners
For most there, that's how it seems to be.

Most mining towns are just like that
The mine is like it's heart and soul
And there's always the feared knowledge
That Mother Nature takes Her toll.

And sadly, this won't be the last time
Folks will be lost while trying to save
Their Brethren who are trapped below
Down in some dark, man made cave.

08.17.2007



Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity.

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1 posted 2007-08-17 09:19 AM


Abe~
Poignant tragedy on top of tragedy~

Keeping them all in prayer vigil~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2007-08-17 09:29 AM


Abe thank you for this, for keeping them in mind and heart.  Nicely done sir.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-08-17 03:00 PM


You write good...mining is a very dangerous profession...James
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2007-08-17 04:00 PM


It's so very sad and makes me wonder how people can work in those conditions never knowing about their safety.

M

latearrival
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5 posted 2007-08-17 07:05 PM


You are so often right there.. thank you, "late"
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