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Roysie Member
since 2007-08-05
Posts 102Canada |
Someday before we vanish a whisper in the hall a shadow on a cold night fading and shimmering starlight fall down upon a world enlightened hatred and heartache a bitter memory freedom tempered only by consideration of all things great and small that once lived on a speck of dust but rose to glory and found Love |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Never mind.  font> "Well I wish that you would cheat with someone, 'cause you're like diggin' holes in water and we know that can't be done." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I don't know Ed, but I thought the one time you could post the same poem in another place is if you are posting in CA...or the poetry workshop forum...well with Ed's response gone mine looks "stupid" Anyway it would be great if the world was enlightened and everyone found Love...in some form or another M |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Well Ms. Nakd, I edited it for a reason. I was mistaken, so I fixed it; I'm only human you know. Have a good one. |
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Roysie Member
since 2007-08-05
Posts 102Canada |
Edie and the Hall Monitor falling over one another to criticize my little Christmas tree. LOL |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Oh no Roy, I like this poem. |
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Roysie Member
since 2007-08-05
Posts 102Canada |
I'm glad Ed. Now I better go make some money or the next one will have a really depressing ending. Have a great day, Roy |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Hahaha, good one. You have a good day too. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have held my feelings back for a very long time...since I was one of the very first you criticized and I just want to say you are a very conceited person and if I should get admonished or warned, I will accept it, because after reading you and trying to give you the benefit of a newcomer on here, I feel you add absolutely nothing to this site except hypocrisy. I don't know what you meant by "Hall Monitor" or "fighting" over your little poem... when the first response was to Ed and the latter to you giving you a compliment of sorts. You actually have become an annoyance. It makes one wonder which poetry site chased you off or what your purpose was in coming to Piptalk. If it was to put others down and make others think you are better than them, you have failed not only in your poetry but in "character". Respectfully M p.s. just for the record to anyone reading this...I actually apologized in an email to Roysie about the reaction he was getting from some of my friends on here ( not that he didn't deserve it) but that if he would just settle in he would find it a wonderful place to post. I received no response whatsoever~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
If the 'author' of this 'write' was referring to Ms. 'nakdthoughts' (negatively) as "the hall monitor"...said 'author' has likely made a large number of enemies! |
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