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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-08-16 07:13 PM


Sharing

Beauty they say, is all in the mind,
but it’s all in the mind of beholder.
"Your beauty my dear is shining out clear",
those were the first words that I told her.

For an opening line it wasn’t divine,
just better than nothing at all.
But after a drink, then even one wink
can lead you to having a ball.

She told me she knew that  my words were untrue
but she figured what I had in mind.
Then said with a grin that her charms I may win
if I’d help her fulfilment to find.

So I then had my way and for hours we did play,
no end could I find to her lust.
From the tip of her toes to the end of her nose
and dwelling a while at her bust.

I knew it was right for it felt firm and tight,
t’was a coupling of souls meant to be.
We decided right then we must do it again,
forever through eternity!

Now were thirty years on, and we’re still joined as one,
though more weathered and wrinkled a bit.
Still from foot to her head I’m continually fed
and still pause for a bit at her tit.

But that’s not all we share, just mad lust as a pair,
for she even does cooking as well.
Though I’m getting fat it don’t stop what we’re at
it just means that we rest for a spell.

So now you can see what my wife means to me,
and how all of our loving is done.
It’s by standing quite tall when I get natures call,
and then making damn sure we have fun.

Ivor G Davies


The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
ggrn3
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since 2000-08-17
Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.
1 posted 2007-08-17 12:12 PM


Fun, Fun, Fun.
I'm glas to see somebody's having some.
Interesting poem here Mr. Davies.
It was nice, I had to read it twice.

Garfield

Fairplay
Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222
England
2 posted 2007-08-18 05:30 PM


Ivor.....

You have let age slip into your poetry here or maybe poetic licence

"Your beauty my dear is shining out clear",

Not (even back in them days 196#) the words of a twenty year old... unless your hero was Frank Sinatra

Natures Call is more often referred to as needing a wee wee.......

Luckily I know you both so well... I cant think of any other couple so well matched.


"Have you met Miss Jones?" someone said as we shook hands,
She was just Miss Jones to me.
And then I said, "Miss Jones, you're a girl who understands
I'm a man who must be free."
And all at once I lost my breath, and all at once was scared to death,
And all at once I owned the earth and sky.
And now I've met Miss Jones, and we'll keep on meeting till we die,
Miss Jones and I.
And all at once I lost my breath, and all at once was scared to death,
And all at once I owned the earth and the sky.
Now I've met Miss Jones, and we'll keep on meeting till we die,
Miss Jones and I, Miss Jones and I, Miss Jones and I

F/S Lyrics

Whoops what was Joan’s maiden name…..

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-08-18 05:41 PM


Hi, Ivor! I've been missing your charming poetry!

Sharing and caring makes the love wheel go 'round, and 'round, and 'round! May yours and your beloved's never stop!

Thoroughly enjoyed!


Linda

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