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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you have learned your lessons now from being an ocean so long and wearing out your welcome at coves and shorelines with too much surge now you ebb and flow some and it is lovely like teasing the edges of a fragile sided whisper with just eyes and not hands now your art is a dance not an overdose of words being pushed with hungry hands by a panther that hurries but more a sigh of dreams slipping down the mind like seeping nectar when one sleeps nude not knowing their face is used by the night for tattooing you are sun and flowers now _____ daark |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
 ~gotta love that panther-poetry~ ~enjoyed this, daark~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
always a pleasure to see how you bend and mend the images and words... a softer touch here than in some and it sits wel on the page... well done sir... as always |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"now you ebb and flow some and it is lovely like teasing the edges of a fragile sided whisper with just eyes and not hands" love this part  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
black panther purrrss....niiice dark.  [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-16-2007 09:50 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Lovely memories of home... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
loved this one D, sometimes your words warm my heart ( but then I always interpret to suit my needs)  M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, making me homesick for the coast again for jetties and coves, the ebb and flow of eons of life-stories |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks crew....am pleased that my offering of some salty sauce got on each of you |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Dark~ I took this one quite personally. It is as though you know me. That is the mark of a true artist, isn't it? You are truly an artist, the way you touch. ~K |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
what a georgous way of saying, less is more... hugs Lee J. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kahlil, sometimes perhaps I do know you or you know me...thank you for wearing this. _________ ms leej, the greatest tastes are so small they must be savored..thanks lady friend |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
D Sometimes I just ride on the color of your words. A |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Amazing write! And, yes, ditto to all the other replies. Helen |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, you are such a blessing to my pen babe, thank you... ________ ms honey, thank you for looking in this window |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was absolutely lovely! I think I have enjoyed this the most of anything you have ever written. Living on the ocean, this just soothed the soul. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"now your art is a dance not an overdose of words being pushed with hungry hands by a panther that hurries but more a sigh of dreams" I love it when my mind is provoked...  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms myst...thanks lady friend.. ____________ ms susan c..it is a pleasure stretching you a bit, thanks ms |
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