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Dance of the Flowers |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
“Dance of the Flowers” A subtle breeze creeps round the eaves To wake the jasmine scent It stirs the leaves in gentle tease That’s much more than a hint In soft light hue before the dew The jasmine seeks a dance With Wedgwood blue, the lilac true In sweet moonlight romance None can compare with quite the flare Of fragrance in the night Arise and share aroma there From lusty blooms delight All intertwined like potent wine Their essence soothes to mend A cocktail fine and oh sublime A lovely perfect blend Throughout the night in pale moonlight Like leather and fine lace Till morning light all is right They dance in one embrace MoonShadow . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh sigh.........just lovely...and more sighs.....Nicely penned sir! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
makes for a beautiful picture~~ M |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
MoonShadow, When I read this aloud it just resonated! Beautiful thoughts, words, rhythm, and of, course, blending of sounds. Very much enjoyed! miscellanea |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
GS... Thank you for your respons (sigh). James... Thank you. Much appreciated. Nakedthoughts...The view is so beautiful when seen through the heart and instead of the eyes. Miscelanea... The music, yes... a soul song. Meant to be spoken aloud, yes. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Awww, I can smell the fragrance and am entranced by the dance. Thank you for such a beautiful start to my day. Alison |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Love the night time secrets. lovely. latearrival |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Loved it; just loved it. You had my sense of smell just tingling with this beauty. The setting with the pale moonlight just put this one over the top for me and my imagination. Garfield |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Aziza... you are most welcome, Milady. Thank you for your lovely response. Latearrival... nighttime is the time for dreams and love. Thank you. Garfield... imagination is a wonderful playground, yes. filled with hopes and dreams of things not meant to be. Thank you for your kind words. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
gentle Sir MoonShadow I can only imagine what it must be like to dance in your garden fair takes my breath away the smell of your jasmine wafts afar lingers in heartsong |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Milady Kate, the fragrance may be fleeting, but the memory lingers an eternity. Thank you for your kind words. MoonShadow . |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ken~ Oh my ... I love the gentle word-fragrance of this one~ I definitely am a "flower girl"~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Marge... your flowers are definitely top of the list. Thank you for your read / response. MoonShadow . |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
beautiful...enjoyed the dance of colors and hearing your soul song! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
R.H.... Milady you are most welcome to any of my works and your response is most appreciated. MoonShadow . |
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