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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

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Canada

0 posted 2007-08-16 03:07 AM

What is it about you I can't live without,
How can I love you without having doubts,
Why do I feel ripped when we are apart,
Do I love you that much with all of my heart?

Could it be the way you look in my eyes,
or the way I trust you to never tell lies,
The way you lean down to kiss the top of my head,
or having comfort even with so much unsaid,

How we can talk without saying a word,
or that our love is the best song I've heard,
The way you light up when I enter the room,
How you breathe in to smell my perfume,

What is it about you I can't live without,
Must be the way you love me without any doubt.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-08-16 07:12 AM

A pleasure to read...James

kasey191
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since 2007-08-16

Posts 33
Australia

2 posted 2007-08-16 09:04 AM

Beautiful

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

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3 posted 2007-08-16 09:06 AM

Krysti, this is LOVELY! Well done.

FadingSun
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since 2000-05-01

Posts 76
Southern California

4 posted 2007-08-16 11:40 AM

good stuff K, good stuff!

In the sight of Love, fear isn't even as great as a single hair: in the law of Love, everything is offered as a sacrifice

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

5 posted 2007-08-16 11:48 AM

~very nicely done, hunnie~~~

The rhyme, well timed and smooth~~~

~enjoyed

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2007-08-17 12:34 PM

thank you all for your kind replies

MegMeg
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since 2007-05-14

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Virginia

7 posted 2007-09-14 04:09 PM

aww... it's so beautiful, y'all sound real pretty together.
¢¾Meg

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2007-09-15 11:11 AM

Heartfelt words.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

9 posted 2007-09-15 12:32 PM

"The way you light up when I enter the room,
How you breathe in to smell my perfume,

What is it about you I can't live without,
Must be the way you love me without any doubt."

~ It appears to me that there are things about you that he "can't live without"!

I am happy for both of you!

To love and being loved in return,

EA

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

10 posted 2007-09-17 02:14 AM

thank you for your replies

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

11 posted 2007-09-19 09:02 AM

love is so wonderful! enjoy and embrace it.

take care,

Amy

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

Gumpy
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since 2007-11-06

Posts 143
Canada

12 posted 2007-11-18 03:31 AM

I love it.
"What is it about you I can't live without,
How can I love you without having doubts,
Why do I feel ripped when we are apart,
Do I love you that much with all of my heart?"

saved in library for sure.
Thanks for the read.

Gumpy

Heartbroken

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

13 posted 2007-11-18 06:11 AM

What is it about you I can't live without,
Must be the way you love me without any doubt.

Krysti... love is a powerful thing.. beautifully said! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

poetninoit
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since 2007-06-10

Posts 20

14 posted 2007-12-06 01:55 AM

that poem could warm the heart of the devil himself

Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

15 posted 2007-12-18 02:44 PM

Another one of Sir Cupids arrows written at its finest. Amazing as all ways.

Abbeon.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

jbal892
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since 2007-11-25

Posts 58

16 posted 2007-12-18 10:20 PM

great read =) reminds me of my girlfriend, it's a relaxing feeling to have

sonatina425
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since 2007-12-18

Posts 7
Beyond the second star to the right.

17 posted 2007-12-20 12:41 PM

I really like this poem. It reminds me so much of my boyfriend-- he does pretty much everything you mention. The way you worded some parts such as, "Could it be the way you look in my eyes,/or the way I trust you to never tell lies".

Beautiful. =)

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