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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The setting sun Has left a deep red streak In the western sky It is the passing day Felt profoundly Knowing it will never Be seen again It is love And the courage To look back And see with the heart’s Inner eye The deep red Of her long wool coat Brushing the autumn leaves As she walked by your side . |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
well discribed ARCTIC WIND |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
excellent 'write!' I am especially fond of: "it is love And the courage To look back And see with the heart’s Inner eye The deep red Of her long wool coat Brushing the autumn leaves As she walked by your side" Significant applause!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very descriptive and nostalgic John, I like it. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed the image of her long red coat brushing the leaves. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
A keeper. A |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thanks Everyone John |
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