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mosey town whisper |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there would always be a poem or two that would remain in the book casual kind of secret penspeak underwear that you would never receive as a gift from an admirer unless you could read my mind or my eyes when you smiled and leaned against that wall with your breasts posing pretending to be elbows and your arms down just being tan with hands on making mine wish they were around you and you were angry that we had waited so long to put our lonely ribs together _________________ daark |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
D You and coffee start my day. A |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"penspeak underwear" That should be copyrighted as your TM...  (and for some reason this made me think of The Last Picture Show too) a gentle summer sizzler from you today--I liked.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
the undertones always are to be admired, the delivery, repsected. well done sir..as always |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
just being tan with hands on making mine wish they were around you and you were angry that we had waited so long to put our lonely ribs together ok, ok, but only if you stay for breakfast enough or I'll have to call 911... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ok now D, you know that when you whisper, everybody lissens... I enjoyed this, mister.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
whispering colors you well, sir... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, thanks little one for sitting in ____________ ms serene, thank you karen for the read and smile side comments _______________ Capt Cpat, thanks sir for the review __________ ms leej, can only imagine the breakfast and hiding the phone from you, thanks lady friend _____________ ms gs, thank you donna for the wave and smile ______________ ms sun, you bless me with another daylight whisper, thank you |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
I needed one more to get my Dark fix before the morning is over. Hahaha, once again, this is gravy. (Gravy being good, I like gravy). "Well I wish that you would cheat with someone, 'cause you're like diggin' holes in water and we know that can't be done." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ED, thank you sir for the reads and reviews |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
reminds me of the Adam and Eve story....when our ribs met that day and we became one...then and only then was all at completion. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms angel, yes and only then, thanks ms |
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