Open Poetry #41 |
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20 years |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569![]() |
Shattered glass and petals The roses have fallen to the floor What once was love and beauty Has gone the way of nevermore I try to gain composure Dab a tissue to my eyes Then say goodbye to fairy tales Until my cheeks are dry To princesses and wedding veils A little girl again Just spin me round and round the room Until my breath grows thin |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Just spin me round and round the room Until my breath grows thin" sadly beautiful Tina |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
woah this is very nicely written. enjoyed this thorouhly. Krysti ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
My life was a fairytale (to me) for so many years... nice writing M |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Thanks all...appreciate your kind words. ![]() |
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