Open Poetry #41 |
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Five AM |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan ![]() |
. With a slender Half circle Glint of light In a dark Not yet Dawn sky The round moon Blue on deeper blue . . . Is to see and know There are other Perhaps even greater things Than you or I Though when combined Two as one At such an hour We can hardly imagine What they are . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Superb! [wonderful to read!] serious applause!! ~ |
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Hyaunt Member
since 2007-07-12
Posts 74 |
Ah, moon, kindly go away let a quiet day stay in his heart in her mind when love comes to prey for no one really wants to be on it's tray under your surway So kindly Ah, moon go away Most sentimental piece and very touching wonderful read Hyaunt |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Now this I can understand and enjoy |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
John You paint words with light strokes that reach to my mind and share the picture. And I smile. Alison |
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