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When Comes Calling
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When Comes Calling |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I hear it calling to me It’s the sea With moonlight rising over And starlight I hear the pounding in me Of the sea Waves after waves on the sand And I stand I smell the calling to me Salt in wind Longing to be out sailing In it all But no I’ve other places to go Things to do, people to sea Places to be come daylight Events to cause beginning And none of it Rides freely driven by the wind. Gloom |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful truly enjoyed |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
‘powerful’ imagery!: I hear it calling to me…. It’s the sea…. pounding in me…” and, I am especially fond of the ending: “I smell the calling to me Salt in wind Longing to be out sailing In it all But no I’ve other places to go Things to do…. Events to cause…. And none of it Rides freely driven by the wind.” long-sustained applause!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Things to do, people to sea" nice word play |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you all For taking the time to read and respond. Gloom |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've captured the rhythm of the waves... excellent work!! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The sounds of the Ocean are one of my favorites pleased you enjoyed Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I borrowed your "driven by the wind" line which I loved~~ M |
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