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in a heartbeat |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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in a heartbeat loss fills my entirety taking breath and stilling heart it grates - bone against bone - lingering where once lived happiness I dreamt, last night, of birth and death then woke cursing the fleeting distance you lived between the two I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You speak of stuff between planes that most cannot imagine, Ruth... and tender sweet breath to both. Only you do it so well...  |
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gwaihir Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 58Sub-tropical, USA |
Achingly sad. I too have cursed the distance between. Well written. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have those kind of dreams when I miss my sister (which is everyday when I look in the mirror~~) M |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you all for your comments but more for understanding  Ruth |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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