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With Some Urgency
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With Some Urgency |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Somehow it just seems imperative to share or perhaps, it is only my altitude of time to know this early face of August as when it touches me on my nose, then when I lift my arms as if to embrace such brief a moment,  it is then, even though I sensed the wind and its own wandering ways, that his face, yea, no, the cloud’s face, veers left, then heads southerly, as if to visit warmer climes if only to keep snow away. So I talk such moments into perspective of how, when one lives in a dreamers’ cloudburst, upon realizing all of her life, and then how, when it rains, such water becomes a godsend. So, I look, for more… with some urgency. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh, I like this. Very pretty indeed. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Sissie.......I looked within that cloud, knowing you saw something there, and saw a baby, new born, with mouth open waiting to be fed, or to rain?...I did!  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You know, I kinda see the beauty of you and the world that you share with us. And, I think you are an incredibly beautiful poet. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sometimes ms sun, I feel you right next door..enjoyed this one ms |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done ma'am.... indeed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I so love when you soar with the eagles MommaK...  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
So I talk such moments into perspective and then how, when it rains, such water becomes a godsend. So, I look, for more… with some urgency. Excellent write Sunshine. JL  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I take it you're needing rain up there, SIL? As always, I enjoy reading your writing....it is so from the depth of you and your heart shows through in everything you write. ....jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, yes, wonderful write, dear poetess! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Very lovely indeed...just floating along with those clouds... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sunshine, Lovely. As for the rain issue, maybe the cloud will take a right and head our way. The ponds on the farm are very low. I did feel two sprinkles earlier tonight! Wishing you rainy weather! hugs, misce' |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I really like this. I am so glad I am able to read here in Pip, again. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is lovely to read. I can understand your prayer for rain as this time last year we were experiencing the seventh year of drought, not to mention bushfires and being as parched as a sunburnt country can get. Now we have rain and I give thanks for every drop that falls. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most fine (summertime) 'write'! I am especially fond of: “… a dreamers’ cloudburst(!)” [grand photo-image as well!] sustained applause!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"his face, yea, no, the cloud’s face" urgency lives in this line Karilea I see it floating lovely work |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...summer is so fleeting and I too am filled with a sense of urgency at this time of year. Perhaps God's way of getting us ready for the long winter ahead. Enjoyed as always dear friend Ruth |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Me, too, Karilea...and the rain has finally come ...those beautiful clouds burst free to embrace us with some cooler air and couldn't dampen the spirit~~  M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good write |
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