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I Heard Your Tender Call
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I Heard Your Tender Call |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I Heard Your Tender Call It resounded in silence, quietly, softly soulfully, skillfully, rejoicing in my heart behind closed eyes I heard soft cry a mind meld of thoughts impart I felt your tender call You were there, so long ago, a heartbeat away in keen memory your words still sway to dance the dance of night’s long song wherein these dreams your thoughts belong Did I dream your tender call Lace strewn veil o'er silent shadows soft holding pleasant gentle of your touch then wing me upward, swift hold me aloft thy tender call is the voice of such I heard your tender call It sang soft, soulful sweet and true as it came from the heart’s heart of you ably it came from behind the refrain that I would hear it, again and again When you tenderly called my name |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
absolutely beautiful so very good and soft and gentle, dear lady! have a wonderful day!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello Sissie....some songs play again and again...I think you know that.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Karilea it makes me long for something I can't even put a name to |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful piece  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gosh almighty, I love your poetry. This poem "sang soft, soulful sweet and true" ~ for it was written by the quill of you!  Love & Sun Light, Linda |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
My friend, I love the way you put words together written truly from your beautiful heart. Hugs! Shenachie |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Lace strewn veil o'er silent shadows soft holding pleasant gentle of your touch then wing me upward, swift hold me aloft thy tender call is the voice of such I heard your tender call" (My favorite verse.) SIL, one of your finest! Lovely, lovely!  *hugs*......jo |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well now Karilea, How romantic indeed are these words. It creates many images in my mind. A delightful write indeed. Thanks. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this reads of a soft whisper....lovely Karilea~...  ~~**~~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such gentle progression from verse to verse... beautiful work!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
omgosh, how did I miss this. I'm glad I needed my daily dose of SUN or I may have never went searching and found this lovely ray of warmth. Beautiful Mommak. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
My...this is a most pleasant ‘write’! I am especially fond of: “mind meld of thoughts”; “Lace strewn veil o'er silent shadows soft” ; AND: “It sang soft, soulful sweet and true as it came from the heart’s heart of you” applause!! |
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Ulysses Junior Member
since 2007-09-20
Posts 10 |
This is beautiful! Thanks so much for your kind words about "In Another Life" - I can see by reading this that you KNOW all about this! lol! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I heard your tender call It sang soft, soulful sweet and true as it came from the heart’s heart of you ably it came from behind the refrain that I would hear it, again and again When you tenderly called my name" A beauty, Sunshine. JL Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Soft reveries are soothing. Thank you, Karilea, for this timely write. It is a perfect fit on this foggy morning. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
So touching, Karilea, and nothing so stirring as when a loved one calls your name be it the seen or unseen. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Karilea you have a wonderful way with words and put together in such a delighful fashion keep up your great talent, loved it. Lindsay |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
"I heard your tender call" , and I wistfully sent out a silent plea, "I am here". Love this ,"late" |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
WOW!! That was all I was able to say after reading it That was really nice, and I have enjoyed it a lot... Tears of Sanity~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
U R a wordcrafter without peer Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
one of your best |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
this brushes the mind like sheer across skin...sigh...memories...they can be torturously real...... wonderful to read you my friend |
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alex09 Junior Member
since 2007-10-12
Posts 10 |
that poem tuches alot of people including me....way deep down with a mark that will never be forgoten!!!!!! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Karilea, this is just beautiful! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Karilea this feels like a pale yellow gown worn dancing all night like the whisper of soft chiffon lovely |
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