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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever 
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I still don’t know how you feel about me Too caught up in my own That I forgot to ask you how it was you felt So now Im still alone. If ever you would think of me Don’t you ever think I bear you Any ill will or resentment. I have nothing but love and respect for you. Two words never to be overused, Never to be considered “cliché” I am in nothing but awe and a state of admiration so unfortunately seldom it is to look upon a soul triumphant but when the day comes when your wayward path leads you to one it inspires you to move the very mountains sending this land of broken hearts careening into the ocean In due time, my love, I cast my soul to your sea I still don’t know how you feel about me Too caught up in my own That I forgot to ask you how it was you felt So now Im still alone. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
so sad all to oft we are human beings in our own self absorbtion you create such promise of life, change, realization... absolutely lovely |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Superbly done, well expressed writing!! |
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