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Dawning Light of His Making
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Dawning Light of His Making |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 The daylight breaks anew in soft accord In streaming light across the shadowed dawn A gift that gently feathers, from my Lord It touches gracefully and then is gone. Though shrouded, darkest shadows filter in And rock me clear to my eternal core They push me down, repeatedly, in sin I flounder helplessly forevermore. My weary eyes behold a dawning light I grovel, but I cannot reach from here Please tell me, Lord, do I have any right To beg for mercy sweet with You so near? So powerful is your beseeching call My Lord, my God, you surely are my all. ~A timely repost of my first attempt at a Sonnet~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I can imagine Him smiling at how you use the gifts that He gave you.  A postcard perfect pic! Love to you, Dear Poet/Photographer! EO  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If any has the right, sweet friend... you do! *S* Beautiful work!! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
My dear lady Marge, this is beauuuuuutiful. a wonderful piece havea wonderful day lovve and many hugs and kisses!!  |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
It's so beautiful!! I am awestruck...speachless  I loved it.So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Only you ccould have written this so beautifully Marge. I needed to come here and read this today. Love you, Nancy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DearestFriends~ Thank you all sooooo much for the super replies~ Our sweet member friend, Denise Snyder, was my mentor in the wings who helped me to get this Sonnet 'spot-on'~ My da-dum's don't usually work in this meter, so it was especially rewarding for me to be able to pull this one off~ Whew ... worth all of the Tylenol it took to complete it~  Nice to know that words of praise to the Lord-of-my-knowing are so warmly rewarded by your comments~  Poetry is the heart of many thoughts to be shared~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
A sweet declaration of faith. A lovely sonnet. I enjoyed this and with I could write one too! |
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I Love Jesus Member
since 2006-12-12
Posts 216ar. |
This is beautiful my friend! Stacey |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
simply lovely Marge |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very powerful poem, Marge...and that graphic!! *hugs*....jo |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Inspirational as well as powerful. MoonShadow . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Marge I'm in awe such beauty! I'm so glad I got to read this one (you know how I do love this rhyme scheme) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I have no words for the beauty held in this loving write and that picture goes so well with this. One of your most impressive writes Margie (and there are many, many of them to chose from.)  In one word? lovely |
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gwaihir Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 58Sub-tropical, USA |
I would envy your skill with a sonnet if it wasn't a sin.  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is wonderful Marge! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjooyed Marge...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all SOOOO much~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautiful poetess! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Not a bad attempt...do it again!! Thanx MT for the beauty of this poem. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Good one Marge! Rave on my friend, rave on! INclan |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...Inspiring write. Wonderful sonnet...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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