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Morning Shall Wait
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Morning Shall Wait |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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This moment is scented heavily with the voice of yesterday; still running through my mind are these images of palms pressed when indigo nights bled into amber mornings and the sun glinted between drawn curtains splashed crossed golden hair where in peace, you slept. I could not bare to wake you as I watched the rise and fall of your breath soft in dreams and I sighed with whisper morning shall wait. Sleep deep now, my love where the shadows bind us in yesterday's hold and I will be content to lie with head resting upon strong tan shoulder until you awake and morning then arrives shattering the silence of memories. If the sun never rises I want to go down in flames I want the last thing I hear to be you whisperin' my name. Each moment together is time that we borrow so hold me tight and love me like there's no tomorrow. {Trace A} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-06-2007 02:30 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
an intriguing piece... well done ma;am... it juxtaposes quite well.. the wait..and the patience.. with the underlying sense of desire..of a quiet urgency.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks for stopping in Capt, and thank you for seeing between the lines in this....a most spot on interpretation indeed sir...  If the sun never rises I want to go down in flames I want the last thing I hear to be you whisperin' my name. Each moment together is time that we borrow so hold me tight and love me like there's no tomorrow. {Trace A} |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Emozioni profonde d'ispirazione. Awe inspiring emotions, for sure. A beautiful image. JL  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a beautiful read, Donna quietly patient and longing |
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Roysie Member
since 2007-08-05
Posts 102Canada |
A lot of indigo around here. What colour is indigo anyway? |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Indigo is the color on the spectrum between about 450 and 420 nm in wavelength, placing it between blue and violet. JL |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you each so much for stopping in. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
this is delicious... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Vandana, Kahlil, thank you both for stopping in. Hugs. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sleep deep now, my love where the shadows bind us in yesterday's hold and I will be content to lie with head resting upon strong tan shoulder Ah... what respite from reality those retreats into memories give us! *S* Beautiful work! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
I like this... very much. MoonShadow . |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
how can you not love this...the imagery is exquisite and the subject is so pleasant...enjoyed thoroughly |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Sleep deep now, my love where the shadows bind us in yesterday's hold" gentle Donna well, you know... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lovely longing here, Donna. *hugs*....jo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sleep deep now, my love where the shadows bind us in yesterday's hold and I will be content ~*~ Smiling |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Another sensual delight of poetry, Wake her softly, Gloom |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Suthern m'friend thank you so much for peeking in. Moonshadow, I am pleased that you enjoyed it. Thank you sir. SteavenR you make me smile with such a lovely comment, thank you sir. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lady Kate, do I ever know. yktiktyk.....  my dear friendand thank you so much for being you and for being here. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
jo, thank you so much. yanno I have to smile every time I see your name, as that too, was my moms name. MommaSun?  yep, you know....  Gloom, thank you for taking the time to pop in and rest your eyes on my meager words for a few moments. |
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