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Observe Gently...
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Observe Gently... |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Walk, don't run, along your life's roads in humility, open to understanding, for all are designed as lessons in experience for the universal soul. Learn to breathe in deeply all of life that surrounds you; pause often, take time to observe every living thing; how a tiny seed transforms into a giant tree, gnarled roots enveloping the edge of a cliff on a lake. Note the cycles of life repeating; feel the growth energy fill and lift your heart as the spreading light of the morning sun gives nourishment to the land. Stand quietly in the rain as its life giving waters run over your skin entering the ground gently where you walk in wonder on one of life's countless roads. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A breathtaking write Windwalker. Oh, how I floated in each verse, and beautiful the landing of the last.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A magnificent mantra to wear and breathe in daily. You have found your song, and it is extraordinarily beautiful. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Gently observing the beauty of this, and the wisdom found within it. Very well done, indeed! |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Intelligent, marvelous poetry, beautifully expressed. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
WONDERFUL ‘write’!... I am GRANDLY fond of the ending in particular!: “Note the cycles of life repeating; feel the growth energy fill and lift your heart as the spreading light of the morning sun gives nourishment to the land. Stand quietly in the rain as its life giving waters run over your skin entering the ground gently where you walk in wonder on one of life's countless roads.” most serious, long-sustained applause!! |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
This takes me to a quiet place. Thank you for the reflection. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
came back for another 'read' of this most fine piece! [something I am not often moved to do]... additional grand accolades!! |
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littlefairy Member
since 2007-08-06
Posts 51New York |
Very nice. It seems like you have a positive outlook on life. That's so amazing to see. Most people pretend they do but it seems as if you actually do. Nice -Tara I’m good during the day. But at night I wait.I wait for the one who’ll never return. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
WindWalker, You know, you are one of my favorites here and this is why! Much enjoyed! miscellanea |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Thank you all so much for your comments!!!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
walk slowly in humility beautifully done WindWalker |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Great daily OM here!  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I enjoy your poetry very much, Windwalker. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 ~ SAVED!!! ~ Lest I forget!  Wonderful reminders, well worth noting! Love & Light, EA  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done~~ now to just feel that rain to replenish the earth and energy~~ maybe tonight  M |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I'm most glad that Ms. 'Marchmadness' brought this fine 'write' back near the top of the 'P.I.P.-land' queue!! continuing applause!! |
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Xillus_Xavier Member
since 2007-10-05
Posts 72Alabama |
Great inspirational poem. I really, really like this. |
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