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Pressured
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Pressured Sometimes the pressure's just too much. It's then I'll take its hit. But when I'm laden by its touch often I'll deny it. So it seems my bed is laid and with it minus covers. The chill I feel is all around and yet it's me it smothers. The tightening of each breath I take. The pain extracted when the pressure seems to be too much and I lay back again. Each day I think that I'm ahead until I read the paper on whose terms, between the lines, the flame begins to taper... And then again possessed am I, the past into the present, until the words held heart inside ooze out their feel, unpleasant. Releasing all the pressures of the normalness of then I sleep it off, and dream a bit to feel the warmth again. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
excellent lyrical spill~~ ~enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Good one M. great description of how it is. mag. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely render of visions slipping in and out of the past Maureen. Like that last verse very much.... Eric |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
"Releasing all the pressures of the normalness of then I sleep it off, and dream a bit to feel the warmth again". You are on a roll.Lovely thoughts expressed. latearrival [This message has been edited by latearrival (08-06-2007 05:26 AM).] |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
There was no pressure when you penned this jewel. Well written and I loved it. Garfield |
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