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ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-07-16 03:58 AM

Inspires by a post by Earth Angel and of course my wife Joan to whom the poetry refers!
.
You

You're the madness of my sanity
the chaos of my calm.
The one who wakes me from my trance
protecting me from harm.

You're the reason for my living
the one who makes my home.
The loving whisper in my ear
when bonded by a phone.

You're the mother of my children
the passion of my lust.
The spirit in my living
and the founder of my trust.

You're the one who calms the weather
when I'm riding through a storm.
You're the one who's love soaks through me
and ensures my heart is warm.

No you are not just my mistress
or not simply just my wife.
You're my reason for existence
and the purpose of my life.

Ivor G Davies

The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2007-07-16 10:29 AM

Yeah! You posted it! This truly is a wonderful testament of your love for your wife, Joan.

God bless you both!

Love 'n hugs,

Linda

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2007-07-16 11:56 AM

She's a lucky lady to be so loved! *S* Beautiful!!

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-07-16 01:51 PM

beautiful

Fairplay
Member

since 2007-01-15

Posts 222
England

4 posted 2007-07-16 10:45 PM

My wives have all been lucky
To meet a man like me
Free from inhibition
A key to set them free

I’m not a man of many needs
A simple life is fine
Err that’s what you aspire to
To be a wife of mine

I give my full attention
My time I gladly share
Marriage is a two way street
For those who really care

It takes a bit of practice
Quite often it’s a balance
That’s the fun of living
Rising to the challenge

Eric Lance Davies

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-07-17 08:07 AM

Enjoyed...James

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2007-07-17 11:31 AM

nicely done!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2007-07-17 12:17 PM

she is lucky.

you both are to have what you have.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

8 posted 2007-08-16 06:57 PM

Sorry for the belated reply, but thank you all for commenting on this. Occasionally I will promote my 'response' to another poet and I am always gratefull to the original poet for inspiring my work this way.

This is one of the reasons I so much enjoy responses to my own work in rhyme as I feel it promotes our now 'old fashioned' art of rhyming!!!

Thanks again....

Ivor

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