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Open Poetry #41

Tuesday Morning

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-01-25 12:40 PM

Wakening lighting,
Storm heading this way,
Today,
Beautiful tuesday morning
Tuesday morning turns into a
misty day,
Tuesday morning,
Just wandering around
the beating of a clock
Heading to the road
to path
To find such luck,
Where I can find myself
In a dream,
Tuesday Morning,
Where can I sse a open sky
With the morning light,
Tuseday morning
Light to the nights of tuesday
Ready to take one step to another,
For a penny of a good luck charm,
In my life,
Monday has gone,
With such sweet sorrow,
Looking for another tomorrow,
When it comes to an open road,
To walk in Tuesday Morning,
Back to the tracks
of I listen EVERY SONG
In Tuesday Morning
Coffee drinking will warm up
my mind,
Blowing winds,
To this country side,
Where love was never found,
And in the cirlce 's of round
of tuesday morning,
Singing each word
where loves hide away
In quick hour
of this tuesday morning,
Tuesday morning.....

simon
Member

since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

1 posted 2008-01-25 01:37 PM

Really nice. I can almost hear Lou Reed singing...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2008-01-25 07:10 PM

What a wonderful write, Vandana, with so many fine thoughts and images.

"Heading to the road
to path
To find such luck,
Where I can find myself
In a dream,
Tuesday Morning"

Dreaming is a pleasant way to spend a Tuesday morning!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2008-01-26 10:15 AM

now I love this!

beautiful write

I just might write one of my own, inspired by the title

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-01-26 04:25 PM

Tell you the honest truth!, I don't really like Tuesdays lol,

But very much Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

5 posted 2008-01-26 08:23 PM

Every morning is a great morning Vandana

if you can get out of bed and do your own thing
Lovely poem, much enjoyed.

Lindsay

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