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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2008-01-25 10:50 AM



Stirring First Light
Alchemy of charity
At first to speak with clarity
Indexed to lips, hush falls the tips
To part the darkness, morning hips
So pale at first, so pale the light
Her dressing gown of noble night
She peaks with cheer
Her habits clear and lifts his face of stone
Organza clouds two tone, move away
Moved by her intent to play
Then full of life, inhaled her breast
She steps into full view, attests
That morning will be stirred
First light her hand procured
And all reflections made
Are pure as day

Copyright Kkh 1/25/08

© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-01-25 11:23 AM


What a beautiful write, Kathleen!
vandana
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2 posted 2008-01-25 12:22 PM


enjoyed
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2008-01-25 03:40 PM


You wrote serenely of the "Stirring First Light" and eloquently described all the reflections as pure as day with your illustrious pen.

Love & Day Light,
Linda

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-01-26 04:17 PM


Very Beautiful

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-01-26 06:20 PM


Nice...James
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