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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio

0 posted 2008-01-25 09:46 AM



Unpainted and raw
not a cloud to release
on her slight frame,
no vibes of green
and rosary pinks
sleep with forget me nots

the jaundice of january

her field
is uncluttered.

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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

1 posted 2008-01-25 10:36 AM


still life
clean slate

I love this:
"the jaundice of january

her field
is uncluttered."

I feel the vacancy.
I always enjoy reading you.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2008-01-25 10:48 AM


Gorgeous write.
Renewal paints itself closely on her pallet Inked one.  Loved this.
TD

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2008-01-25 11:21 AM


This is some wonderful imagery, Mish.
Thank you for your 'tao' comment on my Bountiful Life post.

vandana
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4 posted 2008-01-25 12:23 PM


enjoyed
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2008-01-25 03:24 PM


A picture-perfect still life of January's doldrums.

I enjoy your vignettes on Nature.

Love & Natural Light,

Linda

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
6 posted 2008-01-25 05:42 PM


Wonderful still life, dear Michele!

Always a joy to read you.

love
Margherita

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
7 posted 2008-01-26 09:51 AM


thanks gang
for feeling the january jaundice with me

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
8 posted 2008-01-26 04:19 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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