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Open Poetry #41

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Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2008-01-24 04:07 PM

See how the moon glows for you
dance across the meadow
and fill this big heart of mine
with all those little things
Chasing shadows
until I fell into your light
now, and forever
Come back and love me
never leave me
just smile and ever wonder
where was I before you?

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
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1 posted 2008-01-24 04:09 PM

"Chasing shadows
until I fell into your light"

*whew*

now that...is romantic

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2008-01-24 04:14 PM

Aha...I wondered when this January moon would smite someone! I know it wakes me up from about 4:15 a.m. on...flooding my room with shadows.

Well done, Robert! It's good to read you again!

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

3 posted 2008-01-24 04:44 PM

absolutely romantic. Beautiful.
love the read. (I wish I could write something like this)
Tom

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2008-01-24 04:48 PM

This was just a delight to my heart.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-01-31 06:59 PM

very romantic Indeed!

ARCTIC WIND

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