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BBGrrl
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since 2007-07-17

Posts 181
BC, Canada

0 posted 2007-07-31 04:53 PM

Midnight ocean, you seduce me -
stars twinklewink from your brow.
Soft silica, sensual with remembered heat
invites my cautious feet to your lips.

Sly tongue lapping at my toes,
gently laughing, bubbling as you draw away.
Bathe me with your kisses, ohhh.

I hear your roar in a raging wave – afraid -
but here, behind the break
tender rills of water flow.
Beckoning me, come to me.
I cannot resist the call of your horn.

I offer myself innocent – then without abandon.
I am enveloped in your rolling embrace;
a seduction of sound, commotion and might.

Seaweed licks with a feathery tongue.
Sea foam spume lathered thick
hiss and bubble on my skin, bliss.

Bladderwrack pods slip discreetly
as I become one with your waves.
Your mighty surges crash into me
beating me senseless with sensation.

Riptide threatens to take me away
to drown in the wake of your crest,
lungs filled with briny seed.
Thrashing giving way to narcosis
sinking into littledeath, your deep.

Bronzeage
Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 197

1 posted 2007-07-31 05:05 PM

Fantastic piece, BBg.

Perfect ending.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2007-07-31 05:45 PM

A petite morte slips its way into the open forum....very nice

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-07-31 05:48 PM

Enjoyed...James

BBGrrl
Member

since 2007-07-17

Posts 181
BC, Canada

4 posted 2007-07-31 07:01 PM

*grin*  Bronze.  So you liked it?

wranx - thank you much for stopping by.   The sea does have a way of sneaking up on you, n'est pas?  Perhaps I should move this to another forum.

JM - I appreciate you stopping by all of my posts.  Thank you.

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

5 posted 2007-08-02 11:51 AM

~how lovely is that~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2007-08-02 01:40 PM

whew, this reminds me of Phantom of the Opera...so sensually alive with passion....and tastefully articulated

well done

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2007-08-02 09:30 PM

The passion of the sea. Wonderful.

BBGrrl
Member

since 2007-07-17

Posts 181
BC, Canada

8 posted 2007-08-03 01:01 PM

Thank you much, Bel1e, LeeJ,ThisDiamond.

The ocean has always been a source of inspiration to me.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2007-08-04 05:50 PM

Soft silica, sensual with remembered heat
invites my cautious feet to your lips.

Sly tongue lapping at my toes,
gently laughing, bubbling as you draw away.
Bathe me with your kisses, ohhh.

wonderful descriptions,BBGrrl

M

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

10 posted 2007-08-04 09:12 PM

BBGrrl, this was just wonderful, enjoyed every line of it, seduction of the sea, the power of your words. Thanks for sharing.

Rick

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

11 posted 2007-08-05 03:41 PM

You swept me away with you. It's beautiful writing, sensual images -- and a pleasure to read.

Thank you
Alison

BBGrrl
Member

since 2007-07-17

Posts 181
BC, Canada

12 posted 2007-08-06 12:23 PM

You are all very kind. It's a pleasure to share with such a complimentary and appreciative set of people.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2007-08-06 06:30 AM

little seascape is huge when well worded, enjoyed it ms

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

14 posted 2007-08-06 11:34 AM

I was swept away in the waves with you while reading this one. One wave after another hit me with every word as I sunk deep in this poetic pearl.

Garfield

BBGrrl
Member

since 2007-07-17

Posts 181
BC, Canada

15 posted 2007-08-07 12:17 PM

Thank you daark, and thank you, garfield.

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