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Open Poetry #41
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-01-20 02:29 PM

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We always go up
No one comes down

We go up up up
With no right turns


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© Copyright 2008 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
TomMark
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1 posted 2008-01-20 06:34 PM

My dear John, what a day when you had three dream in a line.

And it was called "day day up up"

why do you twist my passion into a string to fit in your thread?  
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