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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia 
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Confused... I became aware... of the ageless old man who speaks in silence... using an absent tongue... to share the Secrets of Life... So that those who seek can clearly see the invisible veil behind which all things lay hidden and in the doing... A cover was placed over a formless cage... fashioned from ether egg shells and macrame memories... called "The Universe" Where sat a sixty two thousand pound carnivorous Love bird... singing a song that was drowned... in silence |
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xrobxscottx Junior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 31United States |
Captivating, to say the least. Nice little piece of work there. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You have such an interesting and humorous turn of mind, Uriah. I enjoy your writing, can't wait to see what you think of next. Ida |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Yes, this is very Captivating!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
of the ageless old man who speaks in silence... using an absent tongue... to share the Secrets of Life... That's some pudding! But very few have the patience to taste it. Much enjoyed! love Margherita |
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