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Jammy
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since 2007-07-30
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Apoptosis

0 posted 2007-07-31 02:21 PM



The moon amidst the astral sky,
Like a pearl immersed in darkened tides,
Stranded in a lonesome cycle,
Where only the light within resides.

The brightest fire in the night,
A beacon to the divine gates,
Burns to guide us safely home,
Through doubt, grief, or cynic spate.

An omnipresent, blessed jewel
Ineffable beauty's silent vigil,
The night so dark and sorrowful,
Now softly glows- placid and still.

Against the darkened twilight sky,
The moon; like heaven within our reach,
Fills our pining hearts with joy,
As our entreated eyes do so beseech.

This lonely beacon stolidly burns,
Through the thick darkness is delves,
Though solitary, it bestows the gift,
Of light so we may find ourselves.

© Copyright 2007 Jonathan Amidon - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-07-31 02:51 PM


Hi, Jammy! Welcome aboard the 'pip ship'! I enjoy reading poems on the moon ~ and yours was no exception!

Love & Lunar Light,
Earth Angel

Jammy
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since 2007-07-30
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Apoptosis
2 posted 2007-07-31 02:56 PM


Thanks a lot for the warm welcome! I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it!

-Jammy

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-07-31 04:53 PM


Enjoyed...James
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2007-07-31 07:03 PM


Hello, Jammy.  Welcome to Passions!
Now, please do me a favor,
and check your email
for a Very Special Message!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Jammy
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since 2007-07-30
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Apoptosis
5 posted 2007-07-31 11:10 PM


Thanks a lot you guys, I really enjoyed the poetry card, too; it was really nice. Thanks again!
CocoBaci
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6 posted 2007-08-27 11:30 PM


I enjoyed reading your poem... looking forward to many more!

*~coco~*
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