Settlement after severance

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Open Poetry #41

Settlement after severance

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2008-01-20 04:34 AM

Settlement after severance

Open the window.
Gush of ray through the plastic blinds
Open the window
Of your new room.

You were used to a similar room.
Difference in address plate.
A similar one
From your past
From tour previous cottage.

By default you have made
Two cups of tea
See, it is a mechanical problem
Of same dull morning.

Playing at the fields
Of new grass.
You cling to her
Only the child you have brought,
Apart from
A few incomplete and torn albums.

Telephone rings
Any news of settlement?

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-01-20 08:47 AM

This poem describes the circumstances very well, dear poddarku.
You were able to bring through the mood.
It's no doubt a very realistic scene.

quote:
By default you have made
Two cups of tea

this tells a whole story!

love
Margherita

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

2 posted 2008-01-20 10:20 AM

dear margharita,thanks.actually it is a story of a lady i know.

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