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aziza
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0 posted 2008-01-19 03:06 PM


    

January Sky Kisses

The sky is conch shell pink (could be dusty rose or mauve
I don’t know).  I simply know that it is pretty in the soft chiffon
winter look that the nothing wears as well as the sky.

My mind wanders this early Saturday morning,
half dressed, I sip coffee while words dance with images
It seems to be the belle of the ball and doesn’t stay long
on any single thought – so I just enjoy the show as it dips and flits.
Lazy moments waltz as the song of the fan and quiet meld in harmony

Tree branches lower icy tips shyly as the sweetness of the clouds
drop confectionary kisses to smooth their sharp needles
and January whispers a soft good morning and turns the day blue.


Alison

[This message has been edited by aziza (01-19-2008 03:41 PM).]

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Honeybunch
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1 posted 2008-01-19 03:20 PM


Just lovely, Alison.  I sure do like your "coffee thoughts"!  
Margherita
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2 posted 2008-01-19 03:35 PM


What a fabulous picture in photo and words!

I'd love to linger within this scenery, while your mind dances and the sky shares kisses.

Simply beautiful!

love
Margherita

aziza
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3 posted 2008-01-19 03:44 PM


Lovely Ladies,

Thank you - you are both beautiful.

Alison

TomMark
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4 posted 2008-01-19 03:55 PM


beautiful poem and beautiful picture
always good poems
Tomtoo

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-01-19 04:13 PM


Fine writing..I think I need a cup of coffee..James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-01-19 07:17 PM


Ali... delightful read and wonderful pic! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2008-01-19 08:27 PM


fine Wintry morning imagery!

much applause for this 'penning!'

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2008-01-20 05:02 PM


n-joyed this one ms, nice photography


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