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xrobxscottx
Junior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 31
United States

0 posted 2008-01-18 11:30 PM

"I smoke, I hate, I yell, I frustrate, I let everyone know who I am, and yet keep my identity a secret.

I am a writer.

I am expression in its purest form.

I can take a sentence and butter it up so much that you no longer recognize what said sentence was trying to say.

And still I have a disability.

Still I am handicapped.

Still I am whole.

Still I am single.

Still I am married.

And though I say the truth I lie with every word that leaves my mouth.

I love you.

I hate you.

I love that I hate you.

I hate that I love you.

I am me.

I am you.

I am everyone you ever looked at, everyone you ever kissed, everyone you ever loved, everyone you ever hung out with.

And still I am no one.

I write.

I read.

I listen.

I talk.

And though nothing ever leaves my mouth I have said more than you could in a lifetime.

I am simply divine.

I am a heathen.

I am whatever you say I am.

And still, I am me..."

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2008-01-19 04:02 AM

WOW!

Powerful!

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-01-19 04:05 AM

wonderful, inspiring write!! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

simon
Member

since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

3 posted 2008-01-19 06:39 AM

I agree, very powerful & a very rewarding, great read.

xrobxscottx
Junior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 31
United States

4 posted 2008-01-19 04:47 PM

Thanks for the feedback guys!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2008-01-19 08:16 PM

Hi Rob.. just came back for another read of this amazing write of yours... I absolutely love it and have placed it in my KEEPER files

Have a good day .. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

xrobxscottx
Junior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 31
United States

6 posted 2008-01-19 08:51 PM

You guys are too nice! I swear!

I'm only 17! I can't really be writing as well as you guys say I am!

But I do appreciate it, and when I write something more I will definitely post it.

-Rob

Clang
Member

since 2005-12-15

Posts 222

7 posted 2008-01-20 04:07 PM

Very well done.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2008-01-20 06:06 PM

I do beieve you are! Nicely done.

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