Open Poetry #41 |
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Senryu |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan ![]() |
. Hard cold— Even cats decide To stay indoors . |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
why senryu. it is 2, 5, 4, Are you just retired? Love the expression. deep dark sea shinning ice floats free harpseals out |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
??...as to the title...but, even more so on the 1st. 'comment/reply' post... |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Huan Yi, Don't they though. All wise cats stay indoors, if they can. Bobby |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
My dear lady Midnitesun, I don't believe that John miscounted his syllables. He just wanted that way. But i intentionally make my silly comments to tell John that I have read his poem and enjoyed it. ![]() [This message has been edited by TomMark (01-18-2008 09:58 PM).] |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thanks everyone Consider my "Japanese" poems in translation . . . K, The "cats" I knew would always insist on "going out", for fights . . .and more for other things. Therein the humor. Thanks again John |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
It is cold I go out in fur Boots stay home to warm up the thought of fine friends long lost shoes |
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