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passion's prim
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passion's prim |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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sometimes you wear the prim shirt and your eyes are fragile something about what a lady does when her woman is resting you frown at my rattle noises and the words I write on your window or that I might wrinkle your habit or tarnish your halo but then it seems she wakes again and sends the lady to her room and says it is ok to feel urges and wear just love water music she opens the blinds and doorways and asks me to leave my shoes outside along with my wristwatch and any other appointments that would make me a gentleman ___________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
she opens the blinds and doorways and asks me to leave my shoes outside along with my wristwatch and any other appointments that would make me a gentleman s m i l e s... Mr Daark... a gentleman indeed! love this RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"and says it is ok to feel urges and wear just love water music" yep  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
you frown at my rattle noises and the words I write on your window or that I might wrinkle your habit or tarnish your halo Another incredible work from you, dear D. Only a true gentleman and psychologist knows women so well and that's exactly what induces them to give passion a chance and to open the blinds and doorways. love Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms R & B, thank you for the eyes here and the smile. ____________ ms suesea, thanks babe for your touch on my pen _____________ ms mar, thank you lady friend for blessing me with gentle thoughts |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This one, my friend, struck a chord in me. It's like Ida's poem about having two pieces .. faces .. parts of us .. I am paraphrasing. I think that the Lady and Woman are very close to each other .. and that Lady's eyes are dancing when she appears all prim. I love this, D. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az...yes there are two parts to the woman...they do intertwine..both are lovely...thank you for the dancing images |
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