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Open Poetry #41

Walking Between Lanes

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2008-01-17 11:41 PM

I could say her name,
Her name with a grain,
That spells the reason I can
Walk through fire and distill
My lies into a bed of confusion.

I could say my name
And forget my own,
The polyester that she wears
Is like Jasmine that bears the teal
Tiles that we find our arms
Wrapped around a naval that touches
Her belly and I slant my eyes
Like the night that shaves each
Hour, that spaces the day away.

Velvet jackets, velvet taste, velvet reigns
Under the under of my lids
That rouse the interpretation
Of how the wind walks
With the people that
I believe could be next to me,

Lifting the sheets,
Leaning on my pillows
Bottomless white pearl.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2008-01-18 05:52 AM

Kinda nice...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-01-18 06:02 AM

yes, I agree with James.. this is nice! enjoyed love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

3 posted 2008-01-18 01:26 PM

Beautiful

Love
"Like the night that shaves each
Hour, that spaces the day away."

and your ending. beautiful.
Tomtoo

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2008-01-18 11:41 PM

Thanks for the responses, happy you all enjoyed.

Tomer

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