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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-07-31 08:40 AM

Within Time

When I see you there
I wonder your thoughts,
if they mirror mine
or are they embedded even deeper
into the silver behind.

Time passes and yet
it seems like yesterday when
we walked hand in hand
down to the stream
where the trickling
drowned out the quickness
of my heart
in beating thoughts anew.

I've hardened to the fears,
those that don't pretend the yearning.
Challenged by the aging of hope
and the knowledge that time
has its own moments
most of which...
hold you within.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-07-31 08:52 AM

effectively emotive 'write'!

I found the following lines of
particular interest:

"I've hardened to the fears,
those that don't pretend the yearning.
Challenged by the aging of hope..."

[not just 'aging' but potential 'demise' of
hope!]...

"There is no 'death' worse than the loss
of all hope"

applause!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-08-01 05:00 PM

Nice...James

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

3 posted 2007-08-27 11:22 PM

Enjoyed a bunch this treat of a read!

*~coco~*

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2007-08-28 12:46 PM

"I've hardened to the fears,
those that don't pretend the yearning."

What a couple of lines -- wow! *hugs*...jo

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2007-08-28 04:45 AM

I wonder about someones thoughts , if only I could read their mind

Hope

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2007-08-28 05:38 AM

This write has a very calming effect.
Great write.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2007-08-28 09:09 PM

I know how you feel. I am right there with you.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2007-08-29 06:09 AM

Thank you for the read and responses...I am
long term subbing at the moment and with school opening this week, I have little time to be online except to check in once in a while.

M

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

9 posted 2007-08-29 07:26 AM

Most inspiring.

MoonShadow
.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2007-08-29 12:25 PM

good read

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

11 posted 2007-08-31 11:32 AM

always enjoy your words

I am the little cracked mirror

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

12 posted 2007-09-01 03:38 AM

beautiful!
enjoyed the read.
Tomtoo

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

13 posted 2007-09-01 07:56 AM

Oh, I loved this part Maureen,

"trickling
drowned out the quickness
of my heart"

Wonderful visual/sound to light this mind's eye. I enjoyed this.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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