Open Poetry #41 |
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Eyes to Eyes...a Bill Charles Duet |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
Eyes to Eyes Still remember when first we met, when eyes touched eyes in warmth of flow. For there you were, as imagined once, tempting lips to share their know. I felt it true in hands that met and held that moment, reflecting now. How then I wished I knew the "next", my heart in want to you allow. There you were the perfect dream, the pleasure missed, in solitaire. I left behind what could have been, what should have been my answered prayer. It echoes now, this heart of mine, the loneliness that you could fill. The calling of a Knightful love, the missing words, the touch to thrill. So I sleep upon a dream that lays a smile upon this face. Knowing that some day will find eyes to eyes in warm embrace. ~~**~~ My thoughts in time to remember whence, eyes of mine searching from head to toe. We met once again, for the second time, lips touched and asked, what did we sow… Your hand was warm in pleasures touch, memories are always of when we met. My heart beat quicker not knowing of, that inside your breast, I, would you let.. Dreams I have now real in retrospect, and yes, pleasures missed, to be one. To embrace we could, but to this alas, reflections have I, why this not done… Understanding inside, yet driven at times, desiring of you, and know now your thought. If known I would then, when hearts beat so, to take the night, but now for naught… I still sleep with dreams, which come forth, of your lips traced slowly, not in haste. Inside I find though these restless wants, of eyes to eyes in warm embrace… . . . nakdthoughts/Bill Charles "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I have not yet read it, but your name together with dear Bill Charles gave me goosebumps ... wow wow wow! now going to read ... love to both Margherita ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Eyes to eyes in warm embrace ... ahhh, there is such a flow of wonderful emotion in your duet, dear Maureen and dear Bill (how we miss you!). You have created a highly touching duet and I can only say that your hearts and souls have expressed their truest feelings so very beautifully, that I do wish you both to realize your innermost desires. I can't say how pleased I am for both of you and for us here! Thank you both. Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Margherita, thank you for your kind responses. Although a duet, and although we met in real, it was fun to make the poem seem more than what it is (I hope that is clear ![]() M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... you have succeeded so well! ![]() |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
This was wonderful. Great job to both of you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is absolutely beautiful. You tow write well together. |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Maureen...Great poem from the two of you. I spoke with Bill on the phone a few years and we talked about me visiting him after he moved to B.C. but never did get to meet each other...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
M. I think we all miss BC from time to time. Well written dear friend. could fool most all of us with this one. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you for the kind responses. It is always a pleasure to share thoughts with Bill and I am hoping he will rejoin us with some poems in the near future. Thank you BC for being who you are ~~ ![]() M |
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