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Open Poetry #41

Forever. Yours.

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2008-01-16 04:11 PM

This lonely day has turned into night,
I feel my heart explode in my chest.
One bitter tear sparks in my eye,
The soul behind it knows no rest.
The light of one more candle is gone,
Reality is scaring my hope,
And through the night I'll be all alone...
But I will keep the promise. I'll cope.

The night. The day.
The miles. Away.
The waiting. Hard.
So frail. Apart.
The dusk. The dawn.
Afraid. Uknown.
Still lost. No way.
Alone. Again.

But everything we're going through
Is bound to leave a mark on my heart.
This mark will bind our lives, me and you.
Tomorrow will be a new start.
I'll shield you from the sword of your fate,
And, bleeding, I will fight for you, still.
The one it took you long to create
Will heal you by one movement of will.

Your eyes. The light.
Arms broken. Fight.
My heart. My hand.
Love. Till the end.
The promise. Here.
With you. No fear.
New ways. New doors.
Forever. Yours.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2008-01-16 04:23 PM

Nice writing...James

Kamelian
Junior Member

since 2008-01-14

Posts 21
Australia

2 posted 2008-01-16 11:55 PM

I love the second verse. So sharp & striking.

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